Re: FNSC6313 Thesis Draft (Jeremy Wu 1155014233)

Hi Professor Kwan,

About the referencing: Sorry, I'll definitely run through my references section and edit them accordingly.

About the scope: I'll probably narrow my scope down to "prebiotic effects on the gut microbiome and how this benefits different aspects of GUT-related Health".

Is that focused enough or do I need to narrow it even further?

Jeremy

On 12 November 2015 at 16:17, Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk> wrote:

Dear Jeremy,

 

A quick scan of your thesis draft/progress report shows that the reference format has some problems. Please check Professor Cheung's instruction carefully to make sure that you understand the format requirement. The second thing is that the scope is too big. Either you will end up with a thick thesis or you can only mention briefly each topic. Please consider a more focused scope.

 

Best,

 

HSK

 

From: Jeremy Wu [mailto:jerrywazhere@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, November 10, 2015 5:58 PM
To: Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk>; hskwan288.fnsc6313@blogger.com
Subject: FNSC6313 Thesis Draft (Jeremy Wu 1155014233)

 

Dear professor Kwan, 

I'm not sure if my format is correct, but this is what i've got so far. I've written "pending" for section which are far from complete, and I will continue to add further details based on your feedback.

 

is it ok if I hand the report in with some of the sections saying "pending" and "briefly describe, etc" underneath, or is that not allowed?

 

Sincerely,

Jeremy

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RE: FNSC6313 Thesis Draft (Jeremy Wu 1155014233)

Dear Jeremy,

 

A quick scan of your thesis draft/progress report shows that the reference format has some problems. Please check Professor Cheung's instruction carefully to make sure that you understand the format requirement. The second thing is that the scope is too big. Either you will end up with a thick thesis or you can only mention briefly each topic. Please consider a more focused scope.

 

Best,

 

HSK

 

From: Jeremy Wu [mailto:jerrywazhere@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, November 10, 2015 5:58 PM
To: Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk>; hskwan288.fnsc6313@blogger.com
Subject: FNSC6313 Thesis Draft (Jeremy Wu 1155014233)

 

Dear professor Kwan, 

I'm not sure if my format is correct, but this is what i've got so far. I've written "pending" for section which are far from complete, and I will continue to add further details based on your feedback.

 

is it ok if I hand the report in with some of the sections saying "pending" and "briefly describe, etc" underneath, or is that not allowed?

 

Sincerely,

Jeremy

Re: Thesis progress report

Hi Professor Kwan,

How's my progress report? Is it ok? Are there any areas you think I should change/modify/add?

Jeremy


> On 10 Nov 2015, at 11:48 AM, Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk> wrote:
>
> Dear Jeremy,
>
> Yes. Please send your draft report.
>
> Best,
>
> HSK
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jeremy Wu [mailto:jerrywazhere@gmail.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, November 10, 2015 11:53 AM
> To: hskwan288.fnsc6313@blogger.com; Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk>
> Subject: Thesis progress report
>
> Dear professor Kwan,
>
> This is Jeremy again. Would you mind looking at my report to give me a few pointers and tips on what is good or what I should change before I submit it? I haven't really shown you my report apart from the initial ideas, so I'd like to check if everything in my report is going well as you had imagined.
>
> Would you mind if I sent it to you tonight?
>
> Jeremy

FNSC6313 Thesis Draft (Jeremy Wu 1155014233)

Dear professor Kwan, 

I'm not sure if my format is correct, but this is what i've got so far. I've written "pending" for section which are far from complete, and I will continue to add further details based on your feedback.

is it ok if I hand the report in with some of the sections saying "pending" and "briefly describe, etc" underneath, or is that not allowed?

Sincerely,

Jeremy

Thesis progress report

Dear professor Kwan,

This is Jeremy again. Would you mind looking at my report to give me a few pointers and tips on what is good or what I should change before I submit it? I haven't really shown you my report apart from the initial ideas, so I'd like to check if everything in my report is going well as you had imagined.

Would you mind if I sent it to you tonight?

Jeremy

RE: Thesis progress report

Dear Jeremy,

Yes. Please send your draft report.

Best,

HSK

-----Original Message-----
From: Jeremy Wu [mailto:jerrywazhere@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, November 10, 2015 11:53 AM
To: hskwan288.fnsc6313@blogger.com; Prof. HS Kwan (School of Life Sciences) <hskwan@eservices.cuhk.edu.hk>
Subject: Thesis progress report

Dear professor Kwan,

This is Jeremy again. Would you mind looking at my report to give me a few pointers and tips on what is good or what I should change before I submit it? I haven't really shown you my report apart from the initial ideas, so I'd like to check if everything in my report is going well as you had imagined.

Would you mind if I sent it to you tonight?

Jeremy